Joseph Sulaiman A2 Media
For our music video pitch, we decicded as a group to create a prezi as it will make the pitch more interactive and more interesting in the way the information is displayed. When we finished discussing our intial ideas, we took down feedback to know what was needed to be done next or whether there was any problems with the ideas we came up with together.
Music Video Pitch
Feedback
NEgative
The main negative responses from our teacher were that the song choice and the narrative were to similar to one and other. As for our mise en scene and ideas for creativity, the feedback revealed them to be unfeasible. Thus we were advised to change them so the new song we decided choose would look better. Lastly, an alternative we were given was to remove our performance and just focus on our narrative with a band editted well with good lighting.
Positive
In terms of positives, our actors were deemed excellent as they did not look young and they fit the genre of indie pop that we were intending to create. The use of props and costumes were not criticised as they were in uniform and diverse. Another positive was our creative ideas which involved a varied use of editing softwares such as Adobe Premier and After effects. Our supervisor liked how we planned on using the effects to convey different meanings and how it were going to be used in the performance in general.
Action Response
In response to the feedback, we decided as a group to change our song choice, however this time we would listen to the song with the laptop close and just listen to the music/lyrics. Doing this will allow us to form our own narrative to thus convey our own meaning of the song. After doing this, we found a song that fitted in with our creative ideas etc and pitched it again to see if it would be suitable enough.